Writing Test 71
Task 1: The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Task 2:Some people think that the teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Other believe that teenagers should focus on the subject they are best at or they are most interested in. To what extent do you agree?
Write at least 250 words.
There is no doubt that pupils learn several subjects during their school. While it is believed that all subjects are useful for the holistic development of children, some people opine that fascinating subjects should be learnt by students. But , I partially agree with both views and both arguments will be discussed in the following section.
To commence with, learning many subjects opens the doors for plenty of job opportunities.Since competition is increasing drastically in all spheres of life, students become all rounder.As a result, they do multitasking , they can work in any job sectors and do not bother about job opportunities.Also, some subjects which are learnt in schools , are related with our day to day life like science, history , geography and mathematics. Furthermore, some school subjects are utilized at work place even if students have completed education in particular subjects.To illustrate, music composer needs mathematical skills to set his compositions.
On the other hand, learning limited subjects paves the way for good score in examination. Moreover, it is certainly arduous for pupils to focus on all subjects at one time and give exams of all subjects. If scant subjects are learnt, students will not get burden and they will get more percentage in examination which is vital for further studies. In addition, pupils take more interest and work hard when subjects are liked by students.
To recapitulate, while students can easily concentrate on study and achieve high marks in examination after learning the subjects which they like,all subjects help them to work in any job sectors.
‘they do multitasking’ they can do multitasking. ‘any job sectors’ sector not sectors since you have used any. ‘in schools , are’ comma should not come here. ‘will not get burden’ will not get burdened.