Writing Test 29
Task 1: The diagram below shows the production of steam using a gas cooled nuclear reactor.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words
Task 2: Some people argue that formal education should start for children as early as possible, while others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It is irrefutable that education has become a corner stone of the development of individuals. Since competition is increasing at startling pace across the globe,parents desire to give best education to their offsprings.While some people believe that children should join school as much as possible at early age,some advocate that study should be started after getting seven years old.But,i support the former notion and in the following section both views will be discussed.
To commence with,it is beneficial for children to take admission in school at early age as they interact with other children and teachers during schooling.As a result,they make new peers and learn several new skills such good communication skills and collaboration skills.Secondly,education plays vital role in individuals’ life and school is a base of foundation for them where they learn everything to make their bright future. Moreover,they get habitual to sit at one place and focus on study which will certainly fruitful for them in the future. Consequently,their mind become sharp,basic become strong and it enhances their cognitive skills.To illustrate,in India, The Kinder Garden, nursery has started in all cities where plenty of three years kids go to take education and as per the survey of education department,students who take knowledge in Kinder Garden nursery,do not get difficulty in learning anything in first standard because they have learnt almost the syllabus of first standard in nursery.
On the contrary,there are many drawbacks in this issue.Owing to that, childhood is a crucial phase of life which comes once in a life and education is buren at small age.Therefore, offsprings miss their childhood and enjoyment time with parents.Also,it is the liability of parents to teach etiquettes and moral values to children at right age.
To recapitulate,children get scarce time with parents at home while schooling , early education imparts them all basic knowledge at young age and they learn to get along with everyone .Hence, offsprings become more knowledgeable as compared to other children.
Same mistake cornerstone is one word not two. ‘ school as much as possible at early age’ as early as possible not much. ‘such good communication skills’ such as. ‘will certainly fruitful’ will certainly prove fruitful. ‘do not get difficulty’ do not face difficulty. ‘On the contrary,there are many drawbacks in this issue’ you cannot say there are drawbacks as you said you support one side so present it as an opinion of third person like However a certain section of society believes that….and then present the other side. buren? Avoid using offsprings it is not a proper plural word. ‘liability’ not liability but responsibility, liability is something you are forced to do.
Sir here u r telling me don’t use offsprings as a plural.it means u r telling me to do not use offsprings world or not plural? Can I use offspring? As singular?but when i write it in worlds then offspring are or offspring is? I get confused.so i wrote offsprings.
offsprings is wrong word it is offspring and that too should be avoided because some examiners consider it informal.